Friday, 27 September 2019

The Mines A'fire


THE MINES A'FIRE
Image result for the mines afire
 The polluting factory ruining lives

 A dirty boy working tiredly

 Those old miners mining steadily

 The fiery mines looking deadly
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:03

    My favorite sentence is Those old miners mining steadily and it's cool.

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  2. Cody27 September 2019 at 10:04

    Jeff

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    1. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:05

      don't use my name please Carlos!

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  3. carlos land27 September 2019 at 10:05

    Nice work Cody
    real good sentences very cool words

    -carlos

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    1. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:09

      What sentences were the cool ones?

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  4. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:06

    I like how you made the picture real big but next time use PUNCTUATION.

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  5. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:10

    DDDDOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN"TTTTTTTTTTTT use CODY'S name CARLOSSSS

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